lexiesloan (lexiesloan) wrote,
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Your Mission, Should You Choose to Accept It


At the moment, my inspiration is completely wrapped up in I'm Off of the Floor, One More Time to Find You but something popped into my mind earlier today and I wrote it down quickly. Would anyone be interested in expanding on this for me? I would love to read it if anyone could come up with something:

To Mark, she had always been a fragile type of girl – even before Derek came to him and told him that she was. There was something about the deep loneliness in those deep chocolate pools of hers and he didn’t understand how no one else seemed able to see it. Something about how she seemed so apologetic sometimes for living and taking up space. He looked at her and saw someone who needed to be taken care of and for some reason he knew he would never understand, no matter how long he dwelled on it, he felt the urge to be the one to provide that for her.

 

But maybe he was wrong. Maybe Lexie hadn’t been fragile at all. Maybe she had only seemed that way when he kissed her the first time and began making promises to her – promises that she believed in and he had ultimately failed in delivering. Maybe she was fragile now that he had come along and broken her.

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